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08-13-2002, 07:20 AM
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The Trainride
Well I've decided to go for it and post my first ever story.
I'ts kinda long so I've attached it as a zipped Word Doc if anyone has problems opening the file let me know and I'll post a copy in a different format.
Thanks to Lilith for beating me until I agreed to post it. Babe you're far too good to me !!! ;)
Enjoy !
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08-13-2002, 07:24 AM
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It is excellent!!! Great story:p
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08-13-2002, 09:07 AM
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Thanks Lilith you're such a sweetie !.......errrr I mean devil bitch woman with a big scary whip ! :D
ok did some fiddling and if ya can't wait to download n unzip the story you can read it here :-
http://www.fluffyknight.com/adult/trainride.html
it's the only thing "naughty" you'll find there so no need to go hunting around for other stuff lol
Let me know what you think :)
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08-13-2002, 12:50 PM
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Fussy!!!!...... great story.......look forward to you posting more.....
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*Sitting in awe of the wonderful story I just read!* There are no words I can type here to let you know, Fussy, just how incredible this story is. It had me twisting with anticipation in my seat. I couldn't stop reading till the end. It is captivating and written very well. I can picture the characters clearly. I can feel their personalities. You had me from beginning to end! Just wonderful babe!TY so much for sharing!!!!!!!
*sorry to sound like a Siskel and Ebert (movie critics) review but......I had to speak my mind!*
Mrs. Lix
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08-13-2002, 05:10 PM
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WOW Fussy... your story's excellent!!!!! I love it! :D
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That was a really good story Fussy! Thanks for sharing it with us... :D
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08-13-2002, 08:41 PM
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Excellent story FP
Page 6-7 MmmmmmmMmmmmmmmmmm :p:p:p
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08-13-2002, 10:17 PM
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Great story FP, just post it straight here next time so I don't hafta mess around with zip & word ;)
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08-14-2002, 08:59 AM
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WOW
Fussy, you had me melting in a puddle...fantastic details :p But then again, I told you what it done to me....hehe
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Loved the story Fussy. You set the scene so well that I wanted to be locked in the cupboard with you, LOL.
Great SEXY story!!!! :D:D Please write some more!!
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Fussy.........I reread the "ENTIRE" story. *wink*....just had to let you know! You have an untapped talent. TY again!
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Oh my!!!! GREAT story Fussy (I just have to find a way to get the temp in here back to normal!) jjjjbo
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Thanks for your kind words everyone :)
maybe one day I'll build myself up to writing another one.
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Wonderful and very well written story, Fussy!!! I loved it!
Now excuse me I need to go and cool down a bit...I got a bit carried away there towards the end! :D
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