05-28-2002, 11:29 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2002
Location: Butt-fuck Nowhere, Illinois, US
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...that was amazing sfc...very hot imagery...I'll never look at baking in the same way...;)...you are a terrific writer with a very good grasp of pace and mood...the way you moved smoothly from playfull to passionate...I look forward to reading your next piece...
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